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video - THE CITY IS A HEART

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you can see the advertise spot in VIMEO: [link]

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fabrique
I think it would been a stronger piece, if you made the road plan in the shape of a heart. So that you create a heart with some of the outer lines, and within you use a lot of smaller roads, etc..

Just my suggestion, I love the idea, but it's just not there in the spot, that you would go: "waaaaaaaaw" :D

I hope you won't take my critique to harsh..
Not mented that way..

Peace & love,

Rik